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RE: My guide / Mi guía - The Ink Well Prompt #72

in The Ink Well2 years ago

You should really do this more often. Even if you don't enjoy the exercise, you should give us the opportunity to enjoy your writing. This is wonderful. We will have to think of more intriguing prompts and skill challenges to lure you back :)

Your 'hook' is wonderful. The realization grows rather quickly in readers that this is no ordinary coffee shop and that is no ordinary barista. The clues you place along the way are subtle, but clear.

Thank you for writing this, and for sharing it. Also, we appreciate that you did comment on the work of other authors in the community.

Come back soon!

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Thank you very much for those kind words. You're right, I should do it more often

Your 'hook' is wonderful. The realization grows rather quickly in readers that this is no ordinary coffee shop and that is no ordinary barista. The clues you place along the way are subtle, but clear.

I am still learning. I have learned a lot with your help. The idea is to keep improving.

Thank you. Thank you very much 😊😄