This is so well told. It could be used for a child's Bible class, to dramatize the event. I've heard the story of Moses but don't know details. I'm not sure how far yours strays from the official 'record'. I'm sure it is almost entirely fictionalized. This would have made a great scene in one of those epic Bible movies from the 50s.
Thank you for sharing this vivid telling with us. We appreciate that you engage meaningfully with other authors in the community.
I can’t thank you enough. I appreciate it. I want to improve my writing. I would like to be further evaluated on my writings. If it is not too much to ask 😅🙏