With an unlikely central character of a scooter, you take us on a lively adventure. Good scene creation. Good character development. Good story arc. Complicated plot line that works, which requires deft writing.
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Thanks for the feedback, @theinkwell. I did my best with the short time I have for this work. Anyways, I will read and comment on other blog posts. Thanks again. :)