This is a breathtaking tale of connection in the midst of a wasteland; the words you choose here are impactful and beautifully strung together! We float off the page into this world, where everything from the sounds to the scents are accounted for. Masterful, immersing, and bold; a true gem. Thank you for sharing your story with us, and for your thoughtful engagement with other members of the community.
Thank you so much for this amazing comment! I'm so glad you enjoyed it as much as I enjoyed writing it; I have an itchy feeling that I'd like to tweak it a little, but overall I'm pretty happy with how it turned out.
I found Sloni an interesting person to write for, with his random blankouts. I was going for a disorientating feeling, which I think kind of works.
Sorry for the delayed response, and thanks again.