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RE: Connected to my soul.

in The Ink Well2 years ago

After so many ups and downs in your friendship, it seemed like this story would resolve with a musing on how some things are not meant to be. However, in your resolution we find surprise and synchronicity between you and your now wife. They say all good things are worth waiting for, and that surely seems to be the case here!

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