Both endings are interesting, @loneliestgirl. Which one do you like best?
One tip for you: in short stories, it is really best to stay in one character's perspective throughout the story. That is the character that is most meaningful to the rader. It's the character we become emotionally invested in. In this story, you show both Henry's and Arabella's point of view.
Thank you for sharing your story in The Ink Well, and for reading and commenting on the work of other community members.
Thank you so much for the tip. 💚
I like the second ending, because both relationships are toxic, and she should not be afraid of staying alone for a while.