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RE: The Ink Well Fiction Prompt 117 - Chocolate Selling Girl

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This is a classic storyline of someone too destitute to pay for the relative's medical care until someone with better means helps them to make the money. (We do see many versions of this particular theme!)

One tip for you: Be sure to check for errors before posting. In this case you spell "Mary two ways: Mary and Marry.

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i have fixed it. Thanks for the correction