This is a lovely story, @maam.sammy. It is fully developed. We have insight into the character, Devolo, and into his mother. While we might feel sorrow for a young man who has gone into the 'upper world', still we see that this is supposed to be a positive experience.
There is realism and magic in your story. It works very well. Thank you for sharing this with us, @maam.sammy. We appreciate that you engage with other authors in the community.