This is a truly exceptional story, @manouche. You've created a complete world for us in this beautiful and poignant coming of age story, full of hopes and dreams and all the wonders that captivate the attention of teenagers. The relationship of Anokhi and Vivaan is drawn really well and convincingly. Anokhi's sacrifice of her dreams to support her brother is inspiring and painful, and is somehow perfect closure to the story arc. Beautifully done!
Thanks for the inspiration, InkWell! I've never actually written any fiction but when I read the prompt, the words started flowing!