Your story was full of suspense and quite scary. Understandably, your friend entered casually not expecting you to be home. Still, your fear was a natural response, which you handled well.
The story went at a fast pace, which must have been a reflection of how quickly the frightful situation unfolded. Playing games was indeed a good idea to help calm your nerves 🤗
Thanks for sharing your story with this week's prompt, and we look forward to seeing more of you in the community:)
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Thank you for your positive words and insightful feedback on my story. I'm glad to hear that the suspense and fear in my writing was well-handled.
I appreciate your encouragement and look forward to sharing more stories and engaging more with the community.
Thank you again for taking the time to read and comment on my post.