You are meticulous in providing us with details about Erica's personality. This is a great character sketch. Also, it has a very strong arc and character development. Erica grows, in this short piece, and the reason for her growth is clear. You justify every event in the story so that it is entirely believable. Your description of her room and her clothes is excellent.
There are instances where an inappropriate word is used, but readers can understand what you mean (ex: breathe when you intended to write breath and perfect when you intended to write prefect). The story is very good nonetheless.
Thank you for sharing this with us, @mrenglish.
Thank you for always making such critiques of our works. It's appreciated as it pushes us to doing our best.
Thanks again.