A lovely story, @mrnightmare.net. It is well-developed and moving. You took your time writing this. You were not impatient to get to the end. Each detail you provide enriches our reading experience.
This is a completely incredible experience, and yet you make it seem credible. By the end of the story we know the mother, the son and the father.
A very good job. Thank you for posting this story in the Ink Well community.
Thank you @theinkwell, actually, I kept on thinking what to write because I had hard time constructing words to write a story. Supposedly it was not like this but I thought I needed a punched at the end.
Thank you