Hi @mrprinxcee. This is a very nice story.
We have some important guidance for you. The first thing is that you have tagged this as #fiction, but it is clearly a real life story. So you should have tagged it as #creativenonfiction.
Fiction stories come from the imagination. Creative nonfiction stories come from your own life experiences. Our article on Creative Nonfiction Tips explains the difference.
The second item is that we ask that you engage in the community. As we mentioned in comments on your first story, we expect everyone who publishes content in The Ink Well to read and comment on the work of at least two other community members for each story published.
The third item is that we ask our community members not to write about physical punishment, beatings, or abuse, as we have a policy about not writing about violence in The Ink Well. Thank you.
Thank you so much