Hi @myztiqakusuk. Thanks for sharing your story in The Ink Well, and welcome. For us to curate your story, you must provide your image source, even if it is your own. If it is from a website, you must provide a link to the source, and it must be from a license free site, such as Pixabay, Pexels or Unsplash. Please provide the source for this image.
We often provide feedback to writers who are just getting started. The Ink Well has some great resources in our catalog of fiction writing tips. For example, we have tips on developing characters in your stories, and integrating action, dialog and narrative. These resources can help you learn how to write more developed stories.