This piece is so cleverly structured with multiple red herrings, such as the mother’s interpretation of the dream, that you really don’t see the ending until it’s staring you in the face. Perfectly done, you capture the reader completely. Excellent!
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Yuuupi, friends! I am happy for your words. Thank you. This week I wanted to do my best to let you know that I can do better. Thanks for motivating me. Regards