You have such a beautiful and lyrical writing style, @nancybriti1, which makes your stories an enjoyable read. As we've mentioned before, however, it is important to check your pronouns after translation, because reading the story in English is quite confusing.
Please save the following information and refer to it so you can correct the pronouns before you post your stories:
Female characters (girls and women) can be referred to with these pronouns:
- She — Example: She walked to the store.
- Her — Example: I asked her to go to the store with me.
- Hers — Example: That purse is not hers. It belongs to Sally.
Male characters (boys and men) can be referred to with these pronouns:
- He — Example: *He likes to write fiction.
- Him — Example: I will drive him to the store.
- His — That football is not his. It belongs to Marc.
If you study these rules and keep them on hand whenever you are using translation tools. Thank you!
Thank you for your suggestion. I will try to follow it. Thank you and best regards