hello @ujochegbesammie. I appreciated your support for other writers and the effort that you put into this piece, even though it was very short and needed some editing work. I felt every step of yours as you trudged home, navigating the storm around you, the storm inside you (your hunger) and the general storms in your life. It drew me in and moved me. You created intimacy and shared vulnerability. This connects with a reader. This is what good writing should do. Your curation would have been higher if you had taken the time to proofread and edit your piece and developed it a little more. However, for such a short read, it was an impactful piece. This is the kind of writing you should look to develop. I look forward to reading more meaningful stories like this.
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Thank you so much for the observation
I'll do better next time
Thank you