This is a sensitive story. You bring subtlety to your treatment of a complex issue. Usually a short story has a beginning, a middle and an end. When we are done with it we move on and forget. I don't think we will forget as readily this story, and the conflict Kevin resolved. We won't forget because you offer insight. This is a short story with a beginning, a middle, an end, and human insight. Quite a bonus.
Thank you for sharing your thoughtful story with us. Have you commented on the stories of other writers in the community. We expect each writer to support at least two others with each posting. This keeps the community strong. Thank you.
Please keep writing!
Thank you so much! I’m honoured to share my story with the community. And, yes, I’ve commented on the stories of a couple of other writers. I really enjoyed some of this prompt’s stories. I can hardly wait for the next.