This is a delightful story. You meet all the targets of the challenge and exceed those targets. Your story transcends a prompt. It speaks of love, heart and talent. (In the fifth paragraph you change pronouns and use the masculine instead of the appropriate feminine. You probably want to edit that.)
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I am very happy that the story I wrote conveyed those feelings. I appreciate your beautiful comment that is a great encouragement to keep writing.
Thanks for the comment, I will correct the mistake and I will continue reading other stories, the ones I have read I liked very much.
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