Your story is true to the words on your blog posts: We define our own happiness. The story follows a great arc. The character definition is very good. And, your handling of the prompt is excellent as is the voice that comes through, consistently. Good job.
Thank you for sharing this story with us. Have you engaged with at least two other authors in the community? We expect that from our writers.
Thank you very much for your comments, they made me happy. Happiness is in each one of us.
I have already read and commented on several stories.
Greetings 😊