Thanks so much for posting your short story in The Inkwell.
Also thank you for keeping the community strong by engaging with other authors!
I do have a small suggestion future stories. You might want to consider using "quotation marks" instead of - to indicate when someone speaks. Excellent work, by the way!
Thank you very much @theinkwell for your recommendation and comment, I will take it into account. Writing and sharing in The ink well, is a continuous learning process.
Greetings and happy day