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RE: A chance encounter

in The Ink Well2 years ago

This is a charming story of coincidences, @popurri. Airline travel is notorious for challenges like lost documents, long lines and frustrated travelers — a perfect scenario for building suspense.

One note: you might want to check over the pronouns (he, him, his for males, and she, her, hers for females). There are a few places where you use male pronouns for a female, like in this sentence: I thanked him for what he had done to help me.

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Thank you @theinkwell for your comment and suggestions.
I will check the pronouns to correct them.
Greetings and happy day