This is a very nice story, @popurri, with some intriguing spiritual elements. The story begins quietly, with everyday details like permission slips and what time the children need to leave to get to the ancient site, and then captivates the reader with action and interesting details when Magaly takes home the vessel and begins to have the dreams!
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Thanks very much @theinkwell. I'm glad you liked it and that I was able to pull off an interesting story arc with a theme I really like.
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