Hello @prinzemike, welcome to Hive and to The Ink Well community.
You write a nice and interesting play there. However, we'd like to draw your attention that we are a short fiction story community.
It might be helpful to have a look at our rules. They can be found at the top of our community's page.
You can also find some introductory information in our recent newsletter. And be sure to visit the resources available in our catalog of fiction writing tips.
We hope to see more of your story writings in The Ink Well in the future.
Good luck!