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RE: The Elevator

in The Ink Well3 years ago

Good story, @rakushasu.

You make us go from the normal, the everyday, to a completely fantastical plane and you do it very naturally, gradually. The reader wants to get ahead of the facts but can't, you prevent it with your imaginative ability.

Thank you for posting this story on @theinkwell.
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