You did a nice job with the story prompt, @rare-gem! Yetunde is a rather heartbreaking character, in her desire to be popular so much that she is willing to lie to try to fit in.
We have a tip for you. In the following sentence, "faithful" should be "fateful":
One faithful Friday after school hours, Lilian followed Yetunde home in another car to find her house which she did successfully.
The expression is about fate and destiny, not about faith.
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Oops thank you so much, my editor skipped that, I will be more careful next time. Thanks for your kind words.