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RE: [EN-ES] That night in the bar that never left | Aquella Noche del bar que jamás se fue

in The Ink Well5 months ago

Inspiration and renewal is to be found in the strangest places, often when one least expects it. It does not matter whether Honey was real or not. She is brought to life by this author as he hones his craft. A clever and well-constructed piece, @rdsmas. Honey is that fleeting moment that grabs all of us on occasion, stealing us away from reality, providing a fresh perspective, awakening something new and exciting that then drives us forward once again. A thoroughly enjoyable piece to be read on as many different levels as one may choose.

Small note: watch out for switching pronouns in translated pieces.

Thank you for sharing your writing in The Ink Well.

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It is worth writing when you come across comments as enriching as this one, when your work is the delight of someone other than yourself.
Thank you for the wonderful gift of your company to my text, and apologies for the escaped pronouns, I note and continue learning.