This is such an imaginative story, @restcity. You take us into the not-too-distant future in this rather apocalyptic tale, which adds to the story's impact. The characters are well drawn, with distinct personality traits, and you've done a very nice job of integrating action, dialogue and narrative. Well done!
Thank you for sharing your story in The Ink Well, and for reading and commenting on the work of other community members.
Thanks for reading!