This is very convincing fiction! We can feel the full force of a young man in this time, pursuing his crush despite her indifference. What a beautiful setting to choose, Paris in a time before any world wars. Romantic and filled with the excitement of this tumultuous time. Wonderfully done. Thank you for sharing your story with us, and for your engagement with other members of the community.
Well, The idea came from a challenge and I was researching what happened at that particular time. Then I came up with the idea and this story was born.
Thank you for your nice comments.