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RE: MUSEUM TRIP - THE INKWELL PROMPT #12 CHILDHOOD SUMMERS

in The Ink Well3 years ago

This is a story within a story. It's a nice touch that the father gets lost in his reverie. It's also charming that the son insists on knowing about his father before the family existed.

The relationship between father and son is nicely conveyed. The reader leaves off with a fondness for both characters.

Thank you for posting this story in the Ink Well community.