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RE: The Cursed Bandits

in The Ink Well2 years ago

Since the narrator is telling us the story, we must presume he is not a stone statue. However, how does he manage to return the cursed item to someone who does not exist anymore? The fact that readers ask this question indicates that you held out attention. Wouldn't it be kind of you to give the reader a clue about the resolution?

A good story. Thank you for sharing it with the Ink Well community.