You are showing lovely progress in the manner in which you write your stories, and in your level of engagement with The Ink Well community. This was a lovely story and showed what can happen when we challenge ourselves to deliver the very best and work together as a team. Please consider editing your work through grammar checkers such as Grammarly or Zoho Writer, or writing your drafts in Google docs so as to identify issues with gender pronouns, sentence construction, and punctuation, and thereby give yourself an opportunity to correct any issues before publishing. Please note that when you are writing for an Ink Well fiction prompt, you should use the following tags: #inkwellprompt #fiction
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