There’s a mystical, almost eerie quality to this piece that evokes misty images that swirl and fade on the paradigm of time. The protagonist is searching, looking in the rooms of life for an answer to her dilemma. What she finds is that the answer is deep within her and it’s been there all the time. Beautifully written, perfectly paced and emotively resolved. Lovely!
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Thank you for your kind and appreciative words. Glad you liked my story @theinkwell
Yes, I have read a couple of stories that I liked and have commented on and supported them as well.