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RE: The Hand Of Fortune

in The Ink Well2 years ago

With a highly efficient use of imagery you keep the reader attached to your lyrics from start to finish, @universoperdido. We know from them of Caleb's ambitious mentalityaa and his cowardice. At the end of the reading we imagine that the soothsayer achieves a sort of justice. In a magical way Caleb's problem disappears and he pays his price. Thank you for this story and for the meaningful comments on the other stories.

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Thank you very much for your comment and support. This week's challenge has really inspired me. My best vibes.