Hi @uzuka. While we would like to welcome you to Hive, your story is not in keeping with The Ink Well policies and has been muted in our community. Our community rules are prominently displayed at the top of The Ink Well community. We don't accept stories featuring violence, abuse or brutality of women, children or animals.
Our community is designed to be a safe and welcoming place for people of all ages.
If you would like to learn how to write quality fiction, our catalog of fiction writing tips provides a list of many helpful articles on fiction writing, including how to develop characters, a storyline and dialog.