Hi @victorkachi. Thanks for posting in The Ink Well. Your story is based on a very well known story that is told to illustrate the point about what we focus on in life. On the positive side, you've done a spin on the classic tale, and instead of focusing on the dot like the students do in the often-told version, the boy focus on the white page.
However, we just want to call your attention to our community rules, as we require stories posted here to be 100% original. You can find the rules at the top of The Ink Well community page. Please be sure to publish only completely original content in the future. Thank you!
Have you checked out our resources for writers in our catalog of fiction writing tips? There is a lot of great inspiration there. We also publish weekly writing prompts, and each of those posts includes links to all of the past ones, plus lists of 150 story ideas. Good luck and keep writing!