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RE: One night, on the lake; a ritual

in The Ink Well2 years ago

Thank you for writing to this prompt. It's is truly a pleasure to read a story that is crafted so well. Your story is a cautionary tale about pride and over-reaching. The convocation plays with powers it does not understand. It seems Chidera was right to fear the narrator.

An outstanding piece. The last line, the most important word is, perhaps, almost.

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Thank you very much. I feel good today. 😂 Thank you much 🖤