Greetings, @wrestlingdesires. Welcome to this community!
You bring us a nice story about the strengthening of a very important relationship in life. The meeting that will allow a grandson to really get to know his grandmother in a direct relationship. The grandmother has a reputation and seems a bit intimidating to a teenager, but he lets himself go and discovers that the two may be more alike than he thought.
You write with accuracy and in a warm, settled manner. Perhaps you'd like to check out some of the props @theinkwell offers as writing tips.
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Thank you so much for the kind words, and the suggestions as well :) I started reading in here, and I expect to be spending time enjoying stories fairly often! I saw some talented writers who I already am a fan of, such as Cesca Jove!