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RE: Neebin and Namid's Dream World

in The Ink Well2 months ago

This is more like a dream transporter, than a dream catcher. It is a lovely story, and you show a mastery of dialog. You also capture the perspective of girls who have become women. Just recently. Their fast friendship is the core of the story, and it works well.

The arc is strong here, as are the scene descriptions.

Thank you for sharing this story with us, @wrestlingdesires.