Hi @yohanys. Thank you for sharing your work in The Ink Well. You've shared a vignette of passion between two people. However, what is missing from this piece is the "story." For fiction to be successful, it requires some development of the characters, and there must be conflict, and interesting action, and a resolution to the conflict.
We have several some excellent writing resources that can help you:
- Writing Tip #2: Adding Conflict
- Writing Tip #8: What Is a Story Arc?
- Writing Tip #25: Do Short Stories Have to Have a Plot?
We are here to help our community members develop the craft of fiction writing. We hope you find this feedback helpful.
Hello dear community @theinkwell! 😊
thank you very much for reading and evaluating this writing.🌹 I also appreciate these writing resources provided. Val, they are valuable to me! 🙏
Greetings and blessings to all!🌺