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RE: The Search For A New World | Inkwell #59

in The Ink Well4 years ago

Hello @youngelder, that is a nice twist on an alien story. All along we imagine ourselves on a hunt. Then it turns out that wanderers are actually invaders of earth.

Great descriptions of the various planets and their different levels of hospitality. One piece of advice: In the first sentence you probably mean uninhabitable.

You did a good job with the skill target (setting) and with the blossom prompt. Thank you for sharing this story with us. We appreciate that you engage with other authors.

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