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RE: Written in the stars.

in The Ink Well9 months ago

You certainly know how to do romance, @zyzymena. The scene is painted, the mood created, the characters ready for love. How gently you begin this story. Everything is soft, almost like a dream. The unrealistic aspect of this--that two people can have a dream relationship--seems plausible in your story. As fantastic as that scenario may be, the skepticism of the characters helps us to accept it.

This is a sweet story and we leave off wishing the two characters a happy future.

Thank you for sharing this with us.

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Awwww! I'm all pink reading this comment. This is the best comment I've gotten from inkwell and I'm so thrilled. Thank you so much. I am glad you enjoyed it