The Ink Well Prompt #84 - Plus Weekly Challenge and Prize Announcement

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Hello and welcome to the The Ink Well weekly fiction prompt and prize announcement! The Ink Well is a Hive blockchain-based social media community of creative writers. If you love to write short stories, we invite you to join us. Or peruse the work of our community members.

Note: We always launch our prompt posts with important information. So be sure to check it out first! Then we invite you to read on and see what we have in store for this week's prompt.

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Weekly Challenge and Prize Announcement

Time for the prize announcement and new challenge!

Last week's prompt and the skill target was chatterbox and 'writing character descriptions'. This community really came through with many surprising, amazing stories!

Many of our writers created original, memorable stories in response to 'chatterbox'. Our selections of this week's winners and honorable mentions reflect how well writers dealt with this prompt and skill challenge.

Update! We are excited to share that in addition to our first place winner, we are awarding a second and third place, in addition to a few honorable mentions. For second and third place we are awarding Hive Basic Income (HBI). The third place winner receives 2 HBI and the second place winner receives 3 HBI.

Here are this week's honorable mentions, all of them written in response to the prompt and skill challenge.

Honorable Mentions

Anzoni with his box, suitcase on his shoulder, walks through the center of the city, he does not know where to go, he stops at the bridge, unexpectedly, he observes that under it, towards a sidewalk that borders the river, there is a space where he can live. He looks for wood from the trees, makes a palisade to serve as walls, finishes it and settles there. He eats fish and some wild tubers.

I realized how much she missed her husband and children the moment I became immersed in her hulky, awkward presence. She has been living alone for more than three years as of today. I leaned against the wall, staring at the ceiling while listening to stories I couldn't understand. She kept telling me stories, laughing, and hitting my thigh with the pillow she was holding.

I turned the cold water faucet on all the way while unfastening the clips that held the hair over my antennae. The water was perfectly cold when I stepped into the shower. I realized, as my hair became soaked, that I forgot my shower flip-flops. I

Kyra felt the urge to pounce on her when Femi placed his hand on hers, to Chi's disappointment. His eyes had turned weary and all its excitement had faded off.

"My dad has always been a workaholic, now, the fate of the world depended on him getting his machine running. I was never one for science but I believed in my father, if anybody could get us out of this, he could. The world leaders gather today to weigh our options, like we have any".

Third Place: Wins 2 HBI

Closing the door behind him, Mrs. Rose walked towards the window to see if he had gone, turning around she found her two daughters staring at her, unable to hold the laughs, they all bust into fits of laughter..
“He is truly a chatterbox” commented Mrs. Rosie which brought in more laughs from the children.

Second Place: Wins 3 HBI

"None of that now, you're free," she said in a gentle shooing voice.
In response, the baby squirrel moved over a few inches to let her pass. She opened the door, humming.
"Well... What do you think you're doing? You certainly don't want back in that cage," said Mom, looking at the sad animal waiting at the door to her son's empty room.

And the winner of the chatterbox/describe a character challenge is... @samsmith1971 with the story Love's Treasure. Congratulations, @samsmith1971. You will receive 5 Hive!

He made his way down to the kitchen, flicked on the light, and refilled the kettle. Then he settled down at the small table, always laid for three, to eat his dinner; reheated leftovers from the evening before. The place setting opposite him had remained untouched for a little over two weeks. The pricking in the corner of his eyes caught him off-guard, but he fought back. He probably had no tears left to cry anyway.

Okay, let's review fiction entries from last week's prompt and launch a new one.

Stories From the Previous Week

@mrenglish
@drstrings
@marynn
@fantom22
@justine619
@littlepiggies
@balikis95
@samsmith1971
@lordtimoty
@nelson-george
@diikaan
@seeger
@wrestlingdesires
@treasure-joshua
@buezor
@chincoculbert
@raymondpeter
@madamnaomi
@fibre1
@bornben
@mcaspectacular
@popurri
@diebitch
@dennmarc

Thank you to everyone who posted a story for last week's prompt!

This Week’s Prompt

The Ink Well is fortunate to have many members who are eager to write. However, the curation team does not have infinite resources. In order to be fair to all writers, we have decided to ask our members to publish only one story per week. If members choose to publish more than that, they may. However, only one story will be curated.

It would be wise to use talent on the best story you can write so you can receive the optimal curation. Remember, Quality over Quantity. Moving forward the Ink Well Team believes this will provide a better experience for writers and curators.

At last, the prompt of the week!
This week's prompt is foil. This may seem like an odd word, at first, but it has so many definitions that it is actually a gift. Foil may mean to thwart, or stop someone from doing something. Foil can be bit of shiny wrapping. Foil can be something, or someone, that stands in contrast to something else (as, a foil in a story). Foil may be part of a building design. It may be a kind of sword, in fencing. It can even be a kind of sailing.

Here are some ideas about how this word might be used.

  1. When Cynthia returned home earlier than expected she foiled the burglar's attempt to steal her cash box.
  2. Martha's favorite character in the Sherlock Holmes series was Dr. Watson, who was a perfect foil for the title character.
  3. Andrew opened the picnic basket and noted that every sandwich was wrapped neatly in tin foil.
  4. When he showed up to his first fencing lesson, Andre was surprised that the instructor gave him a foil to practice with.
  5. Michele wasn't interested in old-style sailing but preferred to hydrofoil.
  6. Marie was stunned by the beauty of the mosque's multifoil arch.
  7. Pierre raised his foil and prepared to fight.
  8. Catherine thought that if she wore a foil-wrapped hat the aliens wouldn't be able to read her mind.
  9. Many people think that foiling sailboats are new, but this type of sailboat has actually been around for a long time.
  10. One of my favorite writers is Miguel de Cervantes, who created the most memorable character, Don Quijote de la Mancha and his foil, Sancho Panza.

These examples for the prompt are only suggestions. You can use one of these as a take-off point, or use your imagination and come up with a unique idea.

For the skill challenge this week we return to one of the most important skills a writer can develop: show don't tell. This simply means that instead of telling us, for example, that Mary is tired, show us how the fatigue is expressed. Are her eyes closing? Is she yawning? Is she dragging her feet? There are many ways you can show that Mary is tired. @jayna has a great essay in the Catalogue of Fiction Writing tips that discusses how writers can show and not tell.

A week from now, we will select a winning story that demonstrates this skill and utilizes the prompt. Of course we will also be looking for overall quality in the winning story. Good luck!

Note: As always, please avoid violent, gory, bloody, brutal, sexist or racist themes and language, erotica and other NSFW (not safe for work) content, and stories featuring abuse of women, children or animals. (We have a complete article about The Ink Well stance on violence and brutality for more information.)

If you don't feel inspired by this prompt or the featured image, feel free to peruse any of our past prompts or our collection of idea-generators:

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  5. Title: The title is up to you. You can come up with any title you wish. You do not need to name it after the prompt or include the prompt word.
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There are so many ideas from this prompt word. I truly love this week's prompt.
Congrats to the winners and to the honorable mention....

I'm happy to hear that, @abigail04 😇

Great jib guys. Well done to all the honorable mentions and the winners.
Foil is not a bad idea. Let's see how we unravel this.
@theinkwell and all the MODs, awesome job you're doing. More feats.

Happy new week folks.

Thank you, @mrenglish. I look forward to reading your story this week!

Congratulations to the winner of the last week's prompt @samsmith1971 and all honourable mentions, the sky is the beginning of our great success. We are going higher and higher by the grace of God. Long live @theinkwell, long live the members of this community.

Thank you, @raymondpeter, I hope you feel inspired!

Yes, @agmoore, Thank you for your support!

Wow, thanks so much, I'm honored 😲

Congratulations to our honorable mentions @rammargarita @dennnmarc @littlepiggies @abigail04 @nelson-george

And fellow prize winners, @balikis95 and of course @samsmith1971 🙌

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!LUV - I really enjoyed your story 💗

Cheers! Everyone was really good and I enjoyed reading most of them. Thanks so much @wrestlingdesires.

And I thank you as well :) ...

Thank you so much @wrestlingdesires 🤗🤗. Congratulations to others too.

congratulations to the mentions @rammargarita @dennnmarc @littlepiggies @abigail04 @nelson-george and the prize winners @balikis95 @wrestlingdesires and @samsmith1971.
special thanks to the team of @theinkwell for their hard work.

Thank you very much. have a nice day


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Big congratulations to the winners @balikis95 @wrestlingdesires and @samsmith1971.
congratulations to the mentions @abigail04 @rammargarita @dennnmarc @littlepiggies @nelson-george

Thank you very much, have a nice afternoon

You are welcome 😊

Thanks so much 🙌

Thank you @theinkwell and all the mods... this is such an awesome surprise 💗😊🙏😊💗
You guys do an amazing job here and I am feeling uplifted this morning... I appreciate all the constructive feedback I get and glean from the mods and the community and so happy you enjoyed my story this week. I loved the ones I read here this weekend. Great job everyone. !ALIVE

@theinkwell! You Are Alive so I just staked 0.1 $ALIVE to your account on behalf of @samsmith1971. (4/10)

The tip has been paid for by the We Are Alive Tribe through the earnings on @alive.chat, feel free to swing by our daily chat any time you want.

A well-deserved win, @samsmith1971. You are a terrific writer, and we love it whenever you bring your gift of the written word and your lovely storytelling to our community. <3


Thanks so much!

I am a regular writer of only three communities and have set a target of 50 posts in total, I fulfil it only but at the same time, I am also very excited that no prompt is missed.
That's why sometimes I hurry to write, but I have no regrets that if any of my stories were rejected by the honourable admins, then I should cry. This life will continue like this till eternity.
This is my entry for the new prompt number 84 foil,
https://peakd.com/hive-170798/@fantom22/piece-of-foil-and-the-thiefthe-ink-well-prompt-84-

Wow.. This is.. This is.. Thank you for the mention @theinkwell and congratulations to everyone that participated. Let's have fun with the next one..😁😁

Nice to have so many participants and so many sotries it might be difficult to choose the best from all the entries. New week and new challenge :)

Here is my entry:
https://ecency.com/hive-170798/@mrenglish/tatafo-the-inkwell-prompt-84
I have engaged on the work of *** die itch*** and ipexito.

Morning The Ink Well;

Today I found myself visiting marynn and royaldiedem. It looks like a few different ways of using the prompt are already coming through.

Here's my effort this week:
https://peakd.com/@lordtimoty/theinkwell-he-wanted-to-change-his-life-but-the-foil-foiled-true-love

Here is my submission :) https://peakd.com/hive-170798/@grindan/you-cant-foil-the-magic-of-coffee

Excited to see where the prompt took everyone else in their stories!

Hello The Inkwell! Here's my story for this week's prompt--
https://peakd.com/hive-170798/@kemmyb/a-thief-s-gold-luck.

Comments--
-Royaldiadem
-Bahnhoft

Hello wonderful people!
This is my entry for this week: https://peakd.com/hive-170798/@idlemind/i-cant-think
I have engaged with @fantom22 and @lordtimoty
Thank you.

Thanks so much for another fun prompt, here's my submission ♥️

https://ecency.com/hive-170798/@wrestlingdesires/the-garbage-raider

My entry to this week; https://peakd.com/hive-170798/@khaleesii/the-mysterious-foil

Thank you so much, also I have engaged with other authors.

This is my entry for the week...
https://peakd.com/hive-170798/@chincoculbert/somebody-save-me-oror-inkwellprompt-84

Supported..
Khaleesii
Nelson-george
Diiikan

My entry for this week. Hope y'all like it 🤗
https://peakd.com/hive-170798/@seki1/the-choice-to-love