Wow, @ubani1! Lights, camera, action. You really put a lot of energy in this story, and it is very successful. Great arc and a lot of suspense. The use of dialogues is wonderful.
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Wonderful action, @ubani1! You had my heart pounding. There is nothing so terrifying as people breaking into your home with guns... unless they also are threatening your children! Well done. I'm so glad she got that call in to the police before the criminals found here.
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Wow, @ubani1! Lights, camera, action. You really put a lot of energy in this story, and it is very successful. Great arc and a lot of suspense. The use of dialogues is wonderful.
Thank you for posting this story in the Ink Well community. And thank your for supporting other authors in the community.
Wonderful action, @ubani1! You had my heart pounding. There is nothing so terrifying as people breaking into your home with guns... unless they also are threatening your children! Well done. I'm so glad she got that call in to the police before the criminals found here.
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STOPCheck out the last post from @hivebuzz:
Five words, don't mess with mama bear! Those thieves were lucky the cops showed up to save them.
Cheers for the thrilling read!
she has no chillz
I'm glad they got there in time!!! It seems like those killers wouldn't have mercy even with innocent children!
Congratulations! This story has been chosen to be highlighted in The Ink Well's weekly magazine for quality work and receiving an upvote from Curie, as well as for supporting the writers in the community with your feedback. Keep writing!