THE ATTIC ROOM
3 years ago in The Ink Well by ubani1 (62)
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creepily entertaining! 😃 tho i cant help but ask why Dean was afraid of the house in the first place? was it the first time he saw the figure in the Attic Room? And how did it become haunted in the first place? Hope you continue this, thank you for sharing! 😁
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A suspenseful story spiced with paranormal terror that engages and makes the reader imagine the ending without getting it right.
A house with many stories, spirits, ghosts
I wonder if Dean's uncle is also stuck in this halfway house...
I guess, I will have to wait for Dean to gather his guts one day to make his way back
Enjoyed the read ;D
Thank you for sharing your spine-tingling horror story in The Ink Well, @ubani1. Poor Dean will not be able to defend himself against the macabre presence in the basement with a Glock!
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This is a spine-tingling tale, @ubani1! I come away with a few questions about this haunting, and who might have perhaps died there, and why the uncle was not aware of it. (Or was he?) But you have some great descriptions and scene setting!
As I mentioned in your story the other day, you want to be careful with your contractions. In the following, "I'm" should be "I am."
You might want to avoid these kinds of contractions and just write out the longer version. :-)
Enjoyable story!
A horror story! Nicely written and well- described
It left me with some questions. Was dean the only one who saw this? I mean his uncle had been there for a long time. The other thing is, what the spirit or ghost actually was?
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STOPHello @ubani1! Your story produces a variety of sensations, some conflicting. I felt admiration for the beautiful house full of magnificent works of art, on the one hand. On the other hand I got the creepy feeling in front of the entity you describe. Who was it? maybe an ancestor? or several in the same entity since it emits a female and a male voice? Fortunately the narrator received a large inheritance, I wish him better luck with the other properties.