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Hi, @ubani1
A story that leaves the reader in suspense. With the guardian of the weapon that can take down the demon dead, the reader wonders about the fate of his wife, his children and the entire village. I imagine, as a reader, that the closeness to the gods may place the protagonist in a more powerful position....
This is a well-developed story. Character development is excellent. We understand the scene, the conflict, and motivation. Finally, the resolution is satisfying.
The story is engaging and is told in the voice of a myth-maker.
Thank you for posting this entertaining story in the Ink Well community. Thank you for reading the work of other authors, and commenting. *We are urging everyone who posts in The Ink Well to take this step, going forward, to ensure our community members are supporting one another. (We also have this in The Ink Well community rules on our home page and in our weekly writing prompts.)
You describe a hero's death. This is a mythic story, so we can accept this ending as we would the end of a myth. You spin a good tale here, @ubani1. I found your story to be a convincing heroic tale!
Wow.... The suspense in this story is epic!!
I literally feel the urgency of the protagonist, he must protect his family and he must protect the weapon.
And he eventually has to make the ultimate sacrifice. A true hero indeed.
This is a beautiful piece, keep it up.
Waooo! hehehehehe humanity and its tendency to create disaster, that was the msj I saw. And poor man, having to pay for it just because he was destined for the death of a creature. A story that causes emotions in the reader.
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Hi, @ubani1
A story that leaves the reader in suspense. With the guardian of the weapon that can take down the demon dead, the reader wonders about the fate of his wife, his children and the entire village. I imagine, as a reader, that the closeness to the gods may place the protagonist in a more powerful position....
This is a well-developed story. Character development is excellent. We understand the scene, the conflict, and motivation. Finally, the resolution is satisfying.
The story is engaging and is told in the voice of a myth-maker.
Thank you for posting this entertaining story in the Ink Well community. Thank you for reading the work of other authors, and commenting. *We are urging everyone who posts in The Ink Well to take this step, going forward, to ensure our community members are supporting one another. (We also have this in The Ink Well community rules on our home page and in our weekly writing prompts.)
You describe a hero's death. This is a mythic story, so we can accept this ending as we would the end of a myth. You spin a good tale here, @ubani1. I found your story to be a convincing heroic tale!
Nicely done, @ubani1. There's a lot of great action in this story, and a powerful conflict with the Karkian. Great name for an evil beast!
Wow.... The suspense in this story is epic!!
I literally feel the urgency of the protagonist, he must protect his family and he must protect the weapon.
And he eventually has to make the ultimate sacrifice. A true hero indeed.
This is a beautiful piece, keep it up.
Waooo! hehehehehe humanity and its tendency to create disaster, that was the msj I saw. And poor man, having to pay for it just because he was destined for the death of a creature. A story that causes emotions in the reader.