This is well designed. You answer questions the reader might have. Is she safe--yes, she's on the estate. Did the explosion destroy the codex? No, the inside of the safe is untouched.
We understand the motive of the thief, and the motive of the librarian. You create suspense and resolution. We do wonder though, will she have a job tomorrow?
Thank you for posting this suspense-driven story in the Ink Well community.
Hello @ubani1,
You have created an interesting scenario. Very imaginative. Of course, in a library it is a valuable book that lures a thief. And what a book. You draw the scene vividly so we can imagine the librarian running after the thief. We do worry about her, but the thief only cares about the book.
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This is well designed. You answer questions the reader might have. Is she safe--yes, she's on the estate. Did the explosion destroy the codex? No, the inside of the safe is untouched.
We understand the motive of the thief, and the motive of the librarian. You create suspense and resolution. We do wonder though, will she have a job tomorrow?
Thank you for posting this suspense-driven story in the Ink Well community.
Hello @ubani1,
You have created an interesting scenario. Very imaginative. Of course, in a library it is a valuable book that lures a thief. And what a book. You draw the scene vividly so we can imagine the librarian running after the thief. We do worry about her, but the thief only cares about the book.
Nicely done!
You're welcome! Keep writing, and the ideas will keep coming :)
I enjoyed this story, @ubani1. It's suspenseful and well told. You did well with the prompt!
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STOPWell I loved it and the library was a perfect scenery
I really like how well made this story is, the world of suspense you have created. Good job.
That is wonderfully written, I wonder is this really happened or fictional? I really appreciate your writing @ubani1