Wow, your writing is getting so good!! This tale took me away to the temple of the Underworld. We understand Dai-lee. Who has not struggled for a goal that seemed out of reach. It might be something completely different, but we all aspire, we all have ambitions that are frustrated by one thing or another. What limits will we go to in order to achieve our ambition.
I expected Dai-lee to pay dearly for his transgression, but you were merciful. You gave the god a sense of humor. That was fun for me as a reader.
Very suspenseful story, @ubani1. You brought us right into the scary underworld, where our protagonist's life is at stake. I found myself rushing through to find out what was going to happen!
I wished this story continues as it is the interesting story I have read so far. It is good to be brave as this can make one great. He has proven himself great and I'm sure that his illiteracy will turned out to be illiterate.
Good story, @ubani1 Some gods are so lonely in their temples that the gaze of a mere human can comfort him. Blessed are those who believe!!!
In the centre of the Temple stood the Judge of the Underworld and surrounded by the statues of gods and demons of the court of the Underworld, which looked so terrifying. None of them were as terrifying as the fearsome Judge with the green face, fierce looking white eyes and bushy red eyebrows and beard.
Thank you for posting this creative story on @theinkwell ,@ubani1 .
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Wow, your writing is getting so good!! This tale took me away to the temple of the Underworld. We understand Dai-lee. Who has not struggled for a goal that seemed out of reach. It might be something completely different, but we all aspire, we all have ambitions that are frustrated by one thing or another. What limits will we go to in order to achieve our ambition.
I expected Dai-lee to pay dearly for his transgression, but you were merciful. You gave the god a sense of humor. That was fun for me as a reader.
Good job!
Very suspenseful story, @ubani1. You brought us right into the scary underworld, where our protagonist's life is at stake. I found myself rushing through to find out what was going to happen!
I wished this story continues as it is the interesting story I have read so far. It is good to be brave as this can make one great. He has proven himself great and I'm sure that his illiteracy will turned out to be illiterate.
Welldone
Good story, @ubani1 Some gods are so lonely in their temples that the gaze of a mere human can comfort him. Blessed are those who believe!!!