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RE: It's Not A Date

in The Ink Well2 years ago

Who called out to Rosa then? 😔 What I like about this story is the ordinariness of it. There is no conflict the size of seismic activity, just a woman dealing with breakup which was caused by actions and inactions.

Will Bert and Nunya begin a new friendship? At one time, I had a feeling like Bert would turn out to be a stalker or something worse maybe because like Nunya, I judged Bert's physical features in the same manner with which she judged those sweet potato chips.

Keep up the good work and congratulations on your book.

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