You are in my sights

in The Ink Well5 months ago


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I have you close by, in my sights, he told me as he approached me with cautious steps and a broken voice.
-I have a woman inside me and that is you.
I remembered that in the afternoon, we had talked about some other topic related to life and how difficult it is to live in this world far from the "crazy sane ones." I was lacking sleep and I ran with certainty to look for him, because when I looked at him, I realized that something was wrong.
I covered myself to the rhythm of some music that was playing on the piano; it was a melody by a well-known pianist that I don't remember now. The moon had hidden and he played louder and louder. I looked up and he was in front of me, cold and impassive, with very red eyes and as if I had rammed into his piano. The reflection of the lights had made him dizzy and he wasn't feeling well.
-Are you okay? Do you want me to take you somewhere? It won't cost me anything.
-And the more I listened to him, I thought, I hadn't looked for love and when I least expected it, it appeared. It dominated all the space inside me and I decided to fall prey to his lips, I didn't care if that was the right moment, but everything went around in circles and I believed in him.
-I want to kiss you and stay with you to take care of you and be that angel who takes care of you. -You made me fall in love and you did it very well, -he told me. I swear that I changed and I'm just your sun and your moon, we will trust each other, because I'm right in the middle of this passion, I never thought that love was for me. But I met you!
It was listening too much, always hoping that I would stay and I missed him, my heart told me to feel it. Because of you, I have met someone who gives me life and gives me peace. I have reconciled with life and with my body, but I am more than that, I am an unknown in front of you.
-He stood in front of me and said, -I have a woman stuck in my throat.

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It's a short poetic love story. One that is touching to the heart. A really emotive piece that depicts the power of love over us.

Greetings

Thank you very much for your comment, all love stories are beautiful.

It's a beatifful love history. Thanks for sharing.

Thank you for your words.

Hermosa historia, el amor te arrastra aunque no quieras, ¿cierto?
Estás pequeñas fábulas son fuertes y expresan las pasiones humanas.
Gracias

Es verdad, el amor mueve al mundo. Dijera Silvio Rodríguez, "engendra la maravilla"!!

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Thank you very much for your recommendations, but when I read it I didn't see the word length of more than 750 words, but for my next story it will be like that. As for the link to the image, I thought it was just to place the site. This interaction has been very useful, sorry for the inconvenience.